Writing Blog Introductions That Keep Readers Interested
Sep 21,2018 - Sports
Most small business owners think about website enquiries in one direction: get more people to the site, and the enquiries will follow. That is true up to a point. But if your enquiry form is doing its best to put people off, extra visitors simply mean more people leaving without getting in touch. Fixing the form first means every pound you spend on promotion works harder.
The good news is that this is one of the cheapest pieces of digital marketing you can do. You do not need a developer, a new website or a bigger budget. You need half an hour, an honest eye and a phone.
Every box you add to a form is a small request for effort. Add enough of them and people give up. Ask yourself, for each field, what you genuinely do with that information in the first reply. If the honest answer is "nothing much", delete it.
A name, an email address and a message is enough for most small businesses. If you need a phone number or a postcode to quote accurately, say so next to the field: "We ask for your postcode so we can confirm a call-out charge." People are far more willing to share details when they know why.
Jargon creeps into forms. "Enquiry type", "Nature of request" and "Please select a department" mean nothing to a customer standing in a queue with their phone in one hand.
Use plain, specific wording instead. A button that says "Send my enquiry" beats one that says "Submit". A dropdown called "What can we help with?" beats "Category". If you are collecting details for a quote, call it "Get a quote" rather than "Request information".
Also keep the opening sentence short and reassuring. Something like "Tell us what you need and we will reply within one working day" does more for completion rates than any clever design.
Uncertainty is the quiet killer of form submissions. People worry that they will be added to a mailing list, bombarded with calls or left waiting for a reply that never comes.
Before the button, add one line explaining the process. For example: "We will read your message and reply by email, usually the same day. No automated sales calls, and we never pass your details on." That single sentence addresses the three most common worries in one go.
After the button, do not leave them staring at a blank page. A simple thank-you message that repeats what happens next is worth its weight in gold:
Then actually reply within the time you promised. A fast, human response turns an enquiry into a customer far more reliably than any further work on the website.
In the UK, the majority of local searches happen on a mobile device, often on a slow connection. Your form can look perfectly tidy on a laptop and be a nightmare on a phone.
Open your site on your own phone and go through the whole form as a customer would. Watch for these common problems:
Ask a friend or family member to complete it on their own phone while you watch. It is uncomfortable to watch someone hesitate, but it is the fastest way to find out what is confusing.
Treat the form as something you tune rather than set and forget. Once a month, send yourself a test enquiry and confirm it arrives in an inbox somebody actually reads. Check the spam folder, because form messages have a habit of landing there.
Make one change at a time. Remove a field, tighten the wording, improve the confirmation message. Then see whether enquiry numbers move over the following fortnight. You do not need analytics software to notice the difference — a simple note of how many enquiries you receive each week is enough.
None of this is glamorous, and none of it requires a big budget. But a short, clear, mobile-friendly form with an honest promise about what happens next will quietly outperform a longer, prettier one every time. Get that right, and any money you spend on driving traffic to the page will go a great deal further.
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John Doe - 29 july 2018
Digital Traffic Written for people who value the details, and want honest guidance they can trust.
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